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Stream of consciousness Sunday: The Accumulator, part twenty nine…

09 Apr

Right, I don’t have much time, so let’s jump straight into today’s SoCS post, continuing this story by using Linda G Hill‘s prompt;

” “give/given/giving.” Begin your post with one of those words. Bonus points if you end your post with one as well. “

Ooh, bonus points, I like a challenge…

The Accumulator, part twenty nine.

Scene: Giving us a bird’s eye view of the darkened street, our POV glides silently along above the rooftops until it comes to a smooth halt, so we appear to be hovering unsupported, directly above one particular house. Then the camera goes into freefall and we find ourselves plunging downwards, spinning sickeningly.

Straight into the black hole of the chimney.

A rotating rectangle of light grows rapidly larger as we drop through the darkness, our descent slowing at the last moment, allowing the FX boys a smooth transition from CGI to live action as the camera emerges from the fireplace in Patrick and Cathy’s living room and drifts across to the open door, towards the sound of voices in the next room.

As we enter the kitchen, Patrick and Adam are arguing loudly, with Cathy’s voice raised above theirs in an attempt to enforce some order on the situation.

“Oh really, and who put you in charge all of sudden?”

“Look, all I’m saying is we should go over there and grab him, drag him in here and see what he knows…”

“Oh yes, brilliant idea, give him time to call for help as you go charging across the street at him. You’d have the whole bloody Department down on us in two minutes flat!”

“Come on guys, let’s calm down a bit, shall we?”

“We could creep up on him from behind, go over the back fence in the garden and come at him from the other end of the street…”

“You know there’s a bloody railway embankment on the other side of that fence, I take it? You hop over that, you’ll drop twenty feet straight down onto the tracks, that’s if you miss the power lines of course. Idiot.”

“Well you come up with a better plan then, if you’re so fucking clever!”

“Umm, Patrick, I think you’d better see this.”

Cathy has moved to the window and is peering through the blinds at something outside. She turns and looks at them with a worried expression, so Patrick joins her takes a look for himself.

“Oh, that’s not good.”

“What? What is it?”

Adam is heading for the window to see what all the fuss is about when he stops in his tracks and they all tense. The muffled, yet still very definite sound of breaking glass comes from somewhere down the hall.

Patrick motions for Cathy to stay where she is and beckons to Adam as he creeps towards the doorway.  The two uneasy allies take up position on either side of the open doorway and Cathy quickly runs to sit at the kitchen counter with her back to them, picking up a magazine which she begins to casually leaf through. They only have to wait a few seconds before stealthy footsteps approach, stopping abruptly on the threshold, presumably as the intruder spots Cathy. 

The first thing that comes into Patrick’s field of vision is a gun, swiftly followed by the hand that holds it and the rest of the assassin’s arm. Patrick sees the forefinger take up the trigger tension and he is about to make a grab for the arm, but never gets the chance.

There is a startled grunt from the doorway and the hand holding the gun starts to droop toward the floor. Patrick steps away from the wall and looks over at Adam, who is smiling in satisfaction; watching Carlisle’s shocked gaze as it follows his arm to the end of its ponderous arc, with the barrel pointing at his own kneecap. The strain shows on the gunman’s face as he fights to resist the unseen force, sweat standing out on his forehead, eyes darting this way and that, looking for escape.

Adam moves to stand in front of him and offers his hand in greeting.

“Oh I’m sorry, you seem to have your hands full. Hello there, I’m Adam, nice of you to drop in. Now, shall we have a game of truth or dare?”

Cathy grins at the bewildered Carlisle.

“Oh what fun. But I warn you, you better tell the truth, because I have a feeling you won’t like the dares you’ll be given.”

*****

To be continued (using next week’s prompt {Which can now be found HERE})…

#SoCS

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4 responses to “Stream of consciousness Sunday: The Accumulator, part twenty nine…

  1. John W. Howell

    April 9, 2017 at 18:59

    Truth or Dare. good game. Liked the unseen power.

     
  2. Dan Antion

    April 9, 2017 at 19:47

    nicely done! Enjoy those bonus points!

     
  3. dalecooper57

    April 9, 2017 at 19:49

    I’m already spending them. ;~}

     

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